All Comments on 'Maries Slavery Adventures Pt. 01'

I hope this story runs and runs.

Great start. Looking forward to more excellent chapters as you push Marie through her slavery adventure.

Wow, what a great beginning.

Please can we have more

Great start! I can see where this one is going, but maybe a rescue for poor Marie after some more chapter - or not!

Marie wants to be a slave so she should go back to Sandy and ask to be her store slave during the day and sex slave at night

Very well done and believable. I’m never sure in legalize slavery worlds if people can be enslaved for showing interest in slavery. Seems so in this one. Although that strains credulity it is a fun story mechanism. It’s a little short and I’m sad there’s only two chapters.