All Comments on 'Marigold Mother'

This reminds me of the classic novels from the 70's from Liverpool Press,Beeline,etc. Very graphic and descriptive. What a hot milf! Would love to see the illustrated version! Can't wait for the next episode.

But so far no incest.

Some of your expressions are hard to understand, eg:

"Even Saint Anthony had a stiffy when she came out of the shower."

"since Ronald Reagan shuttered mental institutions. 

Readers here are not all USA."

At times this really struggles to be English. Other times it struggles to pull off the light-hearted thing. Hard to know what you were aiming for, or if English is your native language. Weird.

You realize incest requires actual sex? Hopper??? Never heard that term from anyone from a country that spoke English. Maybe Kenya?

What happened to the rest of the story?

Why didn't you finish it?

Please write a chapter 2 of this story.

Let me know if you do.

rjb49@bellsouth.net

Its good when a mother is honest. Her hairy cunt can satisfy her Son, and its righteous to share. Promises are kept in her twat, when he spews seed.