All Comments on 'Marion Turns Me On Ch. 06'

Simply Amazing, Thank you!

Marion had a tiny lock that she attached to my Prince Albert ring and the ring in my scrotum. She said it was for my own good, so I wouldn't be tempted to self-pleasure and so wouldn't run the risk of being punished.

Is this the real reason that she wanted the Prince Albert ring put on him, so that this could be done to lock away his cock. Did it really have to be done! The dominating woman always seems to want to lock the poor guys cock in these stories no matter how much they say they love each other. Also if their tattoos say soul mate and the other's name on their body; what was the name on Marion's body since you never said what the main character's name was.

This is, far and away, the most erotic series I've read so far on this site. I would recommend taking all the 'marion' stories and re-structuring them so that they can be a little easier to read, as far as time sequence is concerned anyway. Then a bit of clean up for repeating phrases and you have a classic here... really well done, please keep going!

I could not stop reading until I read the complete story. Did not even stop for lunch and did not want the story to end. I wanted to be transformed right into the story and be part of it! Not into pain but there was controlled pain in the story with a "safe" word where the players could stop if desired! Thanks

I didn't care to read the descriptions of his coordinating nails and clothing all the time. Just saying.... Good story other than that.

And a number of errors and references that made no sense. Poorly done.

Would love to be transformed and feminised just like this. Bliss !

i wish i could find a lover like this

I wish I had a Marion in my life. That was until she made him suck cock. Oh well! I guess we have to take the good with the bad.

Pretty much a straight forward feel good story with no conflicts or issues to overcome. However, in this story, feel good is a good thing as it’s a rather detailed story that walks through several years of their lives. It’s well written with lots of different kinks for your reading enjoyment. One thing I really enjoyed was the ending. Most endings come fast and don’t do a good job of tying up the story, not with jomar…this writer knows how to write a story ending. I like a long story I can sink my teeth in and this story fit the bill…thank you jomar, you are appreciated! I will call this story a must read, with my only negative comment being the lack of true feminization. He has so many things done to him and changes made by Marion, but I was surprised and disappointed that Marion did not give him tits…would have looked sexier in all those dresses.