All Comments on 'Marion's Story Ch. 14'

Don't let her get back with Molly. Molly has cheated twice and has a completely different view of a healthy relationship than Marion does. They might love one another but they aren't good for each other. Marion needs a love that is supportive, not manipulative. Not someone who keeps trying to force her to be something she doesn't want to be.

Love it. Hanging on threads for the next part!!

I have to go with the others thus far. Waiting for the next piece. They just never seem to be long enough. :)

Marion and Kim might work. Despite how good Molly may feel in his arms, she'll never stay, and that's what Marion needs most.

I hope Marion/Mi stands by her values. I know it is tough to love someone who doesn't love you the same way. I have my own ideas of how the story should go but I enjoy the direction you have gone in all the stories you have written. ( I have gone back and read them all). Sometimes I agree and sometimes I disagree with them but I have always enjoyed them.

Still following this, must point out in most your stories the women seem to all be manipulative. All follow a pattern of a guy being manipulated and pressured into something they don’t want but being manipulated and badgered until they eventually give in to what the manipulative woman wants eventually. I hope this breaks a trend as it’s a great story.

Molly + Mimi gang 4 life . Hopefully they get back together

Mimi belongs in the band and belongs with Molly. It's time for her to let go of her pain and her anger and be where she really belongs.

There are quite a few editing errors on common things that spell check won’t find but a decent word processor will. Things like: to and too, commas to break up 2 thoughts in the same sentence, etc., spoken lines without quotation marks. Great story and I enjoy the characters you’ve developed.

A crossing of paths at the recording results in Mimi showing the producers how her music is written and intended.Mimis own offerings get recorded and out there.

Kim and Mimi show Molly how hurtful casual sexual daliences hurt significant others.

I can see the band healing and Mimi and Kim school Molly on dedicated relationship work and feel. Mimi returns to the band and proves her talent and musical genius. Mimis transition continues and be sperm being frozen and her signification other providing the preserved as Mimi tries to authenticate her feminine self. TNX Jim t........

I too hope Mimi stands on her Morals...unless there's some kind of big Shake Up from Molly, or Mimi finds a Girl better suited to her beliefs...but for now the Music is obviously still there for her.

But this Wayne guy needs to go before Mel kills him....another great Chapter!

Can molly change her free spirited ways, and commit to a monogamous relationship? It sucks that Mi had to fight the band over her songs, but the girls in the band should have stuck with Mi when there was a sexual predator trying to get in his fiancés panties.

I’ve really enjoyed this story, and the ODKL prequels, I hope you can figure out how to get them all back together again, you have put an almost insurmountable rift between them, so I can’t tell if your going to have a reunion, or keep Mi as a solo artist.

Thank you KS

Mi continues to become more immature, stubborn, and petulant. In previous chapters, Mi was more mature. She was someone that was soft spoken, considerate, helpful, and willing to to help others. She handled pain and problems without burning the house down. Now she is selfish, hard, and hateful. Mi in previous chapters never tried to hurt anyone. Now in the past two chapters, she has almost hit bottom with this statement..." Molly, all I want to do at the moment is hurt you"...as well as continuing to hurt the Lips. I now find myself wanting to see Mi fall and fall hard. You reap what you sew. She should also change her name as Mi no longer exists. Some immature hard-edged bitch took her place.

Time for Mi to start over. She went west for a reason and hopefully found what she was looking for

I just get pissed off reading this story. Everyone around Mi just runs over her and has no consideration for her. I would have f’ing got out and walked before riding with Molly and would have disowned my sister for life for pulling that stunt. Every person in this story is horrible and Mi is spineless. I’d cut my mother out of my life if she pulled that crap too. I hate when stories just leave me feeling angry and disgusted.

The only possible good ending for this story is for Mi to cut all the toxic people from her past and meet new friends that aren’t manipulative, selfish twats.

Not sure where you’re going with story but I plan to continue reading. Not much sex in the last three chapters.

This is clearly being rushed, I don't know why I'm still checking, Is actually making me uncomfortable. Maybe I check to see if is heading in a better direction, but I don't know.

you dropped a hint that they will be all in LA, does that mean there will be some type of reunion ? how will that play out ?

hope Kim is not a Gloria implant to get him to go back to the band or give up his songs

although Kim could be the one that helps Mi understand that there is nothing wrong with wanting to feel like a woman with an extra package for excitement and keep his penis

hope there are several more chapters before you end this

i am glad your have Mi/Marion a lesbian as for me its more enjoyable and envious of him

marion was worried Molly would bring disease home, then slept with some skank on the first night. WTF, She is all over the board, and deserves to be ousted and left alone.

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

These characters make me happy and piss me off

Janet

Good story, but I cannot believe you claim it has been edited; too many spelling errors, run on sentences in nearly every paragraph, etc.

I'm so over this Molly drama. Also the blatant misgendering is getting ridiculous.