All Comments on 'Marital Habits'

by Carol_J

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Sidney43Sidney43over 6 years ago

Loved it. Who would have thought Goblins talked like English pub girls, but what do I know?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Could've easily been in horror

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yup.

Men ARE simple creatures, and say that as a guy my own self. Keep us fed, respected, and... played with, and we will be yours. Just like dogs.

Sadly, women tend tone evil and manipulating... just like cats. At least they like being petted.

HobomonarchyHobomonarchyover 6 years ago
Nothing wrong at all

Title is in answer to your bio question. I loved this story, it's too bad it's a one-shot because I would love to know what happened to the two of them afterwards.

NotFamiliarNotFamiliarover 6 years ago
Five Stars

That was pretty damned amazing. The dialogue was well put together, the pacing had a satisfying build, and I really like Gwen as a character. Would like to hope that more of this story could happen someday, but even if it doesn't - this was a good read.

acupacupabout 6 years ago
Needs another chapter

too good a story line to leave it hanging.

OblimoOblimoabout 6 years ago

acup, what do you mean? All that happens next is Ven gets fed and fucked and fed and fucked and fed and...

Ahem.

I see your point.

MagnificoGiganticusMagnificoGiganticusalmost 5 years ago
One of the hottest stories I've ever read!

Title says it all. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
X to doubt

The cynic in me says the whole story was a lie and she just drugged and seduced him for money. I mean she is a hooker.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice.

Pleasing little story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

One of my all time favorites,

majorshanemajorshaneover 2 years ago

Very sexy. I love stories where the man is seduced slowly by the woman, both her body and the story she’s telling creating a well of lust that he can’t escape from. 🥵

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just FYI, there are more chapters to this story on the The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive and more Carol_J's stories as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Thanks for this story. I really enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Absolutely glorious. "Copper-ante spearman" may be my new favourite insult.

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