All Comments on 'Mark and Barry Ch. 01'

this is very convincing and a nice example of combining theory (gender aspects etc.) with storytelling. funny, at times, and sexy. MORE!!!!

My favourite line in the whole thing. As if people here are so sex-crazed that they can't keep it in their pants for even a second. Still, like the story though. Interesting to see where it will go from here.

I look forward to reading more of this story. It was really great.

When's part 2 coming? This story is HOT! And I'm a straight guy (more or less!)

i ant more!!!!!! u cant stop there i was drawn in and ur storywriting ability is unique somewhat....MORE!!!!!!!!!

so much for straight. i jacked a guy off in the loo last night. his wife was outside waiting.?

good read

who knew a kiss n handjob cld be sooo hot

i'v read this several and each time's as hot as the 1st.