All Comments on 'Mark and Barry Ch. 03'

by sam8

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ohhhhhhhmygod.

Hottttttt. When they finally do it, it's gonna be so good. You're do a great job of building them up to it. Then internal struggle is honest and nice to see.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ah ah ahhh is right

Fuck that was hot!!! got me horny and hard. just seeing barry getting his ass aclimated to what's coming next was intense. now you got me wondering who the bottom is going to be or if they are going to both be pitching and receiving. can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The best ever!

Thank you, that was great Ch.! I enjoyed every action, every word. Hopefully in next Ch. they will take it easy. Why? Because I would like the story to be longer! Too good!!! Are you planning them to start dating seriously with all those little problems - that couples have?

Thanks again *sam8*

hotlover69hotlover69over 11 years ago

sexy read, good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Dang!

I mean, dang!

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