All Comments on 'Mark and Nancy's Hot Tub Night'

Great start. Looking forward to more.

I thought it was a great, sexy story. I would have liked the seduction process to have been extended a little more, but that's just me. The only flaw I saw was that she never touched him until she put him inside of her. I would have liked to see a little more "touch the cock" action. Other than that, I hope you do a Chapter 2 at some point in the future.

Chapter 2. Hopefully he'll get her pregnant. And decide to live as husband & wife raising their kids.

*this is probably not how to describe events that aren't dialogue*

Yes, please continue.

Wish something like this would happen between me and my little sister.

Great story and somewhat believable. Love to see where chapter 2 takes them!

actually not a nice story, errors in wording, grammar

A little disjointed in the text - but the story moved. Just weird line breaks and probably not how you wrote it. Liked the story very much in spite of that - 5 stars.

Good story. Waiting for chapter 2.

Hot!

Great story, would like to have been able to read more

Pretty hot...hot tub incest story.

When you find sister as horny as YOU are it must be so very arousing!

4 Stars

Such hot desire. I love it, so I'm ready to find out what happens next!

More than a year later without a follow up? Why>