by KeithD
Great short story and beautifully written! You must have been channeling your two protagonists, Ken and Clifford. The sex scenes were so erotic and well crafted that I could picture the action and every different position like I was watching a movie in my head. And I loved the way you brought everything back full circle in the final New Year's scene. I hadn't realized how prolific you were until I clicked on your name. I realized I had read some of your previous work, but now I'm going to go back and read them all. Thanks for the lovely experience.
The other Anonymous comment is perfect. It was easy to visualize and feel the scenes you created through the decades. Your use of imagery is superb. Channeling Ken's experiences was nothing less than phenomenal! Beautifully crafted!
Another outstanding story. I love your work, the plots, the characters, the storytelling. I've read every one of your stories under both names. Keep it up!
An excellent story
I love that you brought Clifford and Ken back together again in the end, yet you realized the love between Nathan an Ken too and brought him there for support.
The sex scenes were phenomenal 😍
Still reading your great works. Keep writing please