All Comments on 'Mark's Young Mother Miranda Pt. 01'

Wow. I am hoping for pt 2 and beyond!

Let's keep this going. Very nice fantasy with so many possibilities.

Hot start, eager to read more. Please dont leave us hanging

she is too hard on him. Not to mention foolish if she thinks he doesn't already know her past which ways heavy on his attraction to her. She is a slow learner it seems? I would still like to read more to see where this goes? But it already looks painful so far.

Thank you for the comments everyone! Typing ch 2 at this very moment. Fair warning: Miranda's willpower is going to hold out for a few Chapters. At least I think so..i don't know how long mine can hold out! At least we know she won't leave him suffering.

Excellent start to what could be a great story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Sequel please

Damn good start. Can't wait for more.

Incest is just too easy. Don’t your characters ever display any real feelings? What’s the rush?