All Comments on 'Mark's Young Mother Miranda Pt. 03'

Rambles around a lot before getting to any consistent story, which almost got me to exit.

With so little ground work it took past the women at the sink and most of the age appropriate females leaving before continuity settled in.

Ultimately, the primary characters were able to add some spice and get to the end too soon; pun intended.

The final third bring hope for further episodes, which I hope you will supply.

Started much lower and grew to an appreciative four -4 - .