All Comments on 'Marooned on Gronk'

Much appriciated.

Reminded me of real-life horror story wherein a leech inhabited within a man's nostril for weeks after he came out of a jungle in South Asia. A nice holiday story.

starts out good hope you intend to finish the story

excellent ideas, but proof read your shit. the spelling is perfect but the poor grammar ruins the flow.

Do another one of these. SUPER HOT!!! I'll be waiting for it! You made me cum twice with it! Very good!

I love the premise, but your grammatical mistakes are distracting. You need to use periods, semi-colons, and dashes, and you need to have someone double-check your spelling. For example, it is "steel", not "steal."

Wow! I loved it so much. I got so hot during it. I want more!