All Comments on 'Marriage Exchange'

Witty, intelligent, outstanding craftsmanship.

Another one of your great stories - I read it thinking of the consequences of such a relationship - and I came to the conclusion that as long as there was good communication between the 3 partners - it would be a wonderful relationshop - Keep up the great work - Luv jena121 xxx

As a former member of a poly triad (broken by death, not choice) I recognized the need for communication, dealt with brilliantly; the open nature of all three parties, handled with great eroticism; and and the stated wit and intellect of the partners, crucial to the other two components.

Well done...again.

What a beautiful concept. You never disappoint me. A wonderful erotic story. I would love to see you continue with these characters. Congratulations

Very interesting. I started off thinking this was something totally new for you. By the end of the story I was comforted by something more similar to your older stories. Good job!

You wrote another fabulous story. I like the way he described the marriage exchange and how it helped Marybeth get rid of Brad. I like how she found Mike and Stacey and the three of them became a triad in love.

... there were organisations like this for real! Perhaps then there might be fewer unhappy marriages around.

Like many of your stories, I think this one could do with a follow-up - for example, what happens to Brad after his conditioning wears off; something related to Chili's attraction to Marybeth, which you hinted at but didn't follow through on in this story; or perhaps involving some of the other counsellors at the other locations, or friends of Marybeth, Jess, etc.

More, please!

I loved it, it was very well written! Not that I want to exchange my husband, just his children, any thoughts?

I wonder if W.T.F. is a Brad wanna be.

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Seriously, it is an interesting story, but not as good as some of your others, like the "The Pilots", "Decisions" and "Circle of Love" for examples. I was also surprised that character names got mixed up a few times.

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Starting off darkly, this turned into a beautiful story, all about compassion, tenderness and love. A fantastic, fulfilling and heartwarming read. Thank you!

Another Great story ! Thanks again.

I love a fantastic ending !

I mean it. It is unbelievable that the ME can get such exceptional results. And, if it can, that it only costs $2,000-$3,000. Tim413