by Romantic1
I mean it. It is unbelievable that the ME can get such exceptional results. And, if it can, that it only costs $2,000-$3,000. Tim413
Starting off darkly, this turned into a beautiful story, all about compassion, tenderness and love. A fantastic, fulfilling and heartwarming read. Thank you!
I wonder if W.T.F. is a Brad wanna be.
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Seriously, it is an interesting story, but not as good as some of your others, like the "The Pilots", "Decisions" and "Circle of Love" for examples. I was also surprised that character names got mixed up a few times.
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I loved it, it was very well written! Not that I want to exchange my husband, just his children, any thoughts?
... there were organisations like this for real! Perhaps then there might be fewer unhappy marriages around.
Like many of your stories, I think this one could do with a follow-up - for example, what happens to Brad after his conditioning wears off; something related to Chili's attraction to Marybeth, which you hinted at but didn't follow through on in this story; or perhaps involving some of the other counsellors at the other locations, or friends of Marybeth, Jess, etc.
More, please!
You wrote another fabulous story. I like the way he described the marriage exchange and how it helped Marybeth get rid of Brad. I like how she found Mike and Stacey and the three of them became a triad in love.
Very interesting. I started off thinking this was something totally new for you. By the end of the story I was comforted by something more similar to your older stories. Good job!
What a beautiful concept. You never disappoint me. A wonderful erotic story. I would love to see you continue with these characters. Congratulations
As a former member of a poly triad (broken by death, not choice) I recognized the need for communication, dealt with brilliantly; the open nature of all three parties, handled with great eroticism; and and the stated wit and intellect of the partners, crucial to the other two components.
Well done...again.
Another one of your great stories - I read it thinking of the consequences of such a relationship - and I came to the conclusion that as long as there was good communication between the 3 partners - it would be a wonderful relationshop - Keep up the great work - Luv jena121 xxx