by haveahornywife
how can a man tolerate his wife being debased by someone? a pathetic eunuch
I'm guessing the wife will get over it. Husband is so very, very lassez-faire. Pass the Brie cheese,s'il vous plait.
stupid,he wanted a whore? He probably got one, even acting put in their absence. Careful what you ask for.
Sorry but without proper punctuation, like quotation marks, it's just unreadable.
Keep writing. 4*
I don't know why anonymous strangers would feel the need to negatively comment on this story. I thought it was fine. I agree with the comment about proper punctuation but also realize no one here is going to win a Pulitzer. It's not world leading journalism. We all come here to read and jerk off. If people didn't like the subject matter then maybe they shouldn't have come into a section exclusively dedicated to adventurous wives. Keep writing... you'll only get better!
...You'll never make a living off your grammar talents, but regardless your story is scorching hot. Five dicks up on the peter meter.
As noted, need to work on language skills. Good first story. Keep writing to improve and ignore the nay-sayers.
Wanted to share a story of something that happened about 12 to 14 years ago. I told the story as I would have told a buddy in a bar. Not wanting or expecting to win any awards. I take full responsibility for my poor language skills and will not lose any sleep over anonymous criticism. Never expected such admonishing critique on this web site. Did receive several positive identified emails. Also thanks for the ID feedback here, both pro and con.
A major premise inherent in LIT is that a consenting adult cannot be debased by any act to which he or she is consenting !!! I thought the story was interesting, and Hubby quite noble in his concern for his wife's confidence! Sounds like there was a reconsideration about the action being restricted to parties in which Post Office was being played !
Makes 'going Postal!' sound good!
There is something about sharing physical intimacy outside of marriage that is a turn on and can benefit a couple's sex life, even if the action only takes place in mutual fantasy. I encourage you to keep writing.
Thanks for writing, I can't wait for the next one. Did you get any action? Debra shouldn't be the only one having fun.
And you posted it correctly. She is one loving wife to do as her husband asks and tells him everything. Keep on writing stories like this.
Loved the title and the story... I really enjoy stories that get u and brings u along the ride!! Can't wait for the next story ;-)
if you don't like or cant handle the subject matter here, why are you reading the stories? is it just a hidden love of yours? i think it was a great story and if more people were like this, there would be a lot less people getting divorced. great writing!!
She took you home and fucked you too. Don't you love a wife that treats her hubby well after he lets her fuck a nice big one.
Been there done that and loved fucking that "wet and warm' pussy.
Share some more.
I assume the title is really "Married Couples Play a Teen Kissing GAME". It was so hot I never even noticed many writing errors, and that's saying something because I usually do.
I enjoyed your story and look forward to another!
Very hot, and sexy.
I wish my wife would do this.
I would love to hear or see her making it with another man.
Love it and want to read more
Another story, please
with out flashbacks I would not have a memory... and those flashbacks at Great...
From a man who loves to share his wife as long as he gets to watch and join in...with a wife who enjoys sex with other men: This was one of the Hottest Stories I have had had the privilege of reading. It will be great to read about your further adventures.
Great game to play when the inhibitions are down! She sounds like lots of fun. wish I were next in line at that party!
You let a couple of men (that you know of) fuck your wife for her self esteem? You were getting all the sex at home you wanted and she gave world class blowjobs but there was just something missing? Since there were no further installments "mommy" must have shut down your access to the Internet. Interesting how you basically pimped your wife out. I wonder why you didn't confess yourself? Not sure she would have appreciated it? Interesting plot but not well told or thought out, truth or fiction aside.
Though my experience with Post Office is limited to high school, I thought double-teaming Kay was an interesting innovation. Maybe that was going on with my girlfriend in high school, but obviously it didn't register with me then :)
Kay is a sweet mixture of innocent and slut. Reminds me of Candy, a 1950s novel by Terry Southern. Southern went on to write bits for Dr. Strangelove, Easy Rider, Pink Panther movies and a huge number of other iconic films.
So start submitting more stories, haveahornywife. Maybe there's a future in it.
rj
its a little choppy at times stiff and rigid like the guy in the room leaving you hard and frustrated. Take the time to let the Story flow if THE STORY FLOWS IT DOESNT MATTER HOW LONG IT IS YOUR ALMOST THERE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK HOPE THIS HELPS this is prisonwifeshubby
The fun ends when you dare your wife to just go for it and have fun. I did that once and she had lots of fun. I found out later that it was because I dare her to do it. So now she goes in having fun. She is only 4' 11" tall 105 lbs with B cup clean shave so all the party people want her. What can I say I love it.
I have always been a fan of these stories where one of the spouses is an observer to the others' sexual escapades and can't or doesn't do anything about I, but also gets turned on by the experience. It is my fave when the woman is the one who has the sexual fun.
You left her when you left for your new job and gotznew marriage as well.
Hopefully, part of this "true" story ends with both hubby and wifey getting Aids and dying slow horrible deaths. Now that's the subject for another story
The asshole husband tells his friends anything goes with his wife during kissing game!Dumb fuck of a Cuck! And the wifeDoesn’t the twat know she’s married and can say NO to the advances of the sleazeball’s?! Stupid husband,stupid wife,stupid story!
This will go down as one of my favorites! Worst part is, it's been over ten years, so there is little chance we get more fun from these two :(