All Comments on 'Married Emma becomes Jack's Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More

Yes I want more. It's a good start. Let us see what happened next

WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 7 years ago
What would have happened if her husband WASNT turned on by her cheating?

The reality is that she would end up divorced, at best, or dead, at worst.

foolscapfoolscapalmost 7 years ago
Crap. Another wannbe lothario sitting in a darkened room...

dreaming of that which has never been

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Obviously ...

This was written by the husband, pretending he's the stud. Sorry to hear about your wife, but please, no more!

verbicideverbicidealmost 7 years ago
Boring.

Look, learn how to write with some sense of drama. It really doesn't matter if I care for the subject matter, the story itself is written with all the gripping narrative of an auto repair manual, and that might have just been an insult to auto repair manuals. This first chapter could double as a soporific, so please don't write any continuations until you take a course in writing, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great

Super and need more.

msbishop702msbishop702almost 7 years ago
Wow wish she was my wife

More, please... Please Sir more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
CONTINUE!!!!

Love to hear all about it. More chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

C'mon you Gonna leave us hanging?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Any thing more would be repetitive.

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