All Comments on 'Marry The Steel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I Enjoyed It Quite a Lot!

Interesting take on the whole Lois Lane/Lana Lang conundrum. Can't see why you can't also throw in Phantom Lady, Wonder Woman, Power Girl, et. al. considering the situation. Be sort of like the "Superman Fucks Gotham" chapters featured elsewhere in Literotica.

Roger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Cute

Have to say that the plot, while silly, is better than the stupid stuff DC is doing. Superman and Wonder Woman? Lois living with some other guy? Clark's secret revealed - by Lois?

Write another one. Got to be better than the real comics now.

ChequamegonChequamegonover 8 years ago
Love Superman stories

Great piece. Love a good Superman/Superboy story. Some of late have been pretty stupid. Your story was just right. There will always be either Superman-Lois or Superman-Lana. This one had both and does it pretty well. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice, but...

Another great story, but this reminds me of the marry the knight series, but why were those never finished?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Don't forget the third "LL"

There's a mermaid named Lori Lemaris out there, and I for one really dig mermaids! Clark, Lois, and Lana could go to the beach and meet up with Lori for a bit of skinny dipping maybe...

As an aside, one issue of "Superman" comics back in the '50s or '60s had Lois Lane transformed into a mermaid by the crazy Professor Potter (or was is Pepperwinkle)

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