All Comments on 'Martha'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

A great summer job!

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swfb70swfb70over 1 year ago

In high school I mowed the yard for the couple 2 doors down. In the fall of my Sr year, the man dies unexpectedly.

My Mother would loan me out to help do all kinds of thins for Mrs Jones. I doubt she knew the bonus I was getting almost weekly from Mrs Jones. She was an awesome teacher, Mrs Jones Granddaughter ( almost 8 years younger than me and my wife for the last 39 years) has certainly enjoyed how much and how well I learned from Nanna.

MalesubdkMalesubdkover 1 year ago

The story ends quit abruptly with no real ending.

What happens to our storyteller and Martha? Are they in love? Are he staying og leaving after the summer?

I hope somethimg went missing in editing and that there os an ending to this story...

tonydxxtonydxxover 1 year ago

A lovely sexy story with touches of humour too.

spurtmanspurtmanover 1 year ago

Fabulous story -- loved the way you built up the sexual tension!

BiggaluteBiggaluteover 1 year ago

A very well written, enjoyable story.

ccs29745ccs29745over 1 year ago

Thought it was a nice story. Keep up the great writing.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 1 year ago

This is excellent! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

At the ripe old age of 92 years this story was told at just the right pace for this Old Codger, I was not even out of breath at its conclusion. (Got to think of the old heart you know). Thank you for your consideration of not giving me a heart attack. The Old Codger

G5902G5902over 1 year ago

Thank you for sharing a fun and well written story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

enjoyed much.! next chapter.?

BroadusBroadusover 1 year ago

Great a real story told well.

Wark2002Wark2002over 1 year ago

A very pleasant story; likeable characters, nice laidback story with meaningful sex. Drop the quotation marks and you’re an explicit Kent Haruf!

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

***A little stiff but still a good read. Thanks for sharing.

juanviejojuanviejoover 1 year ago

I liked it...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

wwaldripwwaldrip6 months ago

Great story, fresh country air really enhances the love making, the open air shower and hot tub doesn’t hurt any either. Really enjoy reading the story!

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