All Comments on 'Martin's Game'

by Omental

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A definite part 2 , towards our proper classy lady Marilyn's submission to new Martin's Game, also her new unwanted sexual awakening by the sexually perverse Martin 's dark erotic world , whilst loving her unassuming husband . While I think our her perverse ( young robber) could exercise a little more restraint in the next Sexy "Game" by having a "Group sex" discount Game ,possibly coming up next time for our mature heroine Marilyn . That how i like to see it go next chapter in Marilyn's POV, next time.

Catch ya later

See you in the next Game?

Cheers!

lowradiationlowradiationover 2 years ago

Fantastic story to goalong with the first two

Very well written

I'm a big fan

Thanks for sharing

Charles

OmentalOmentalover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the encouragement

Omental

skirtsuitskirtsuitover 2 years ago

Another riveting story the elegant posh uppity lady becomes the unwitting victim at the total mercy of a deranged young stranger...great work Omental more pleeeze

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A rough day for Marilyn and Martin may well a few more surprises in store for her... if there is a follow-up chapter.

I had hoped that there would also be a new chapter in "Linda's Late"'. The possibilities are most delicious and who knows what lascivious demands may fall upon our busty heroine? The lads might decide to dell her affections to other nasty citizens of the neighborhood?

How tempting, how exciting. Linda might even learn to enjoy the added attention..... after a time.

Mr. B

Rachel_uk_46Rachel_uk_46over 1 year ago

oh my, that really was most erotic. I couldn't help but put myself in Marilyn's place several times! Quite delicious!

OmentalOmentalover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for your kind remarks. I would like to imagine you into Marilyn's position too. ;-)

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