All Comments on 'Marty's Last Day'

A pretty hot tale but he joke at the end is pretty old.

A great way to retell that old tale. It would be good to see more story version of those old jokes. While I don't generally approve of cheating, that stingy husband probably had it coming.....he should watch what he tells the wife to do. LOL.

I should have seen the punch line coming but the story was so involved, I was caught off guard. Well done.

Glad you folks liked it. It's an old joke turned story. But life's too short not to have fun recycling old sex jokes. Cheers everyone!

Thank you, enjoyable story.