All Comments on 'Mary/Marcy Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I liked it for its light heartedness, but along with the wanton need of the mom and her son. Would like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Tuấn địt Liên

Con điếm Nguyễn Thị Liên lồn rỗng toác vì bị con trai là thằng Trần Anh Tuấn bắt con đĩ Liên đi bán dâm

snippe69snippe69almost 6 years ago
Awsome Story

Amazing start of the story, Look forward for the following chapter's

Five Stars

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
Good story

I am sure there are many women that have the same problem with a husband that had ED and other problems. You handled the story well. It was an erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Correct the title as misleading

Fairly unique plot line and enjoyed the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Keep Going

I might have kept it a little more tender and loving for the beginning. Maybe later, as their relationship develops, she let's him know that from time-to-time she like to have her man be more aggressive and dominating. I think she needs to have an ankle bracelet placed on her to show her new boyfriend relationship (this could come in the next chapter). Keep it going!

boaman007boaman007almost 6 years ago
Good stuff

I enjoyed the start and can't wait for more. Great story line, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great start. I’m looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good Start...

... a few typos, but no big deal. Looking forward to where you'll take it.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 6 years ago
One of the best

Reminds me of my mother and myself

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