All Comments on 'Mary the Deviant'

Loved the entire story. Mary sounds like the perfect wife and is fantastic how she is such a sexual deviant. PLEASE write more !!!

the detail made this story hot and steamy....

Please write more

I was playing with Mary on Lit a couple of days ago and she asked me to read your story.. I am a voyeur so I loved watching along side you. the only negative commet I have is you need to be careful about your english grammar and choice of words. There were a few times the word used was not correct in meaning and I find that puts me off the story. Use spell check to help you with your structure. Otherwise good work and I hope to see Mary again.

Enjoyed this story very much. Yes, here and there the grammar and spelling need tidied up a bit but it didn't take away from the erotic build up. Good pace in the development. Look forward to more.

i wouldn't call Mary "the Deviant" seems to me she just has a very open and healthy libido, She sounded a lot like my ex-wife. The story was a bit long but worth the read.

It was so hot, chatting with Gary about mary while I read the story. Then looking at her picture made me go relieve myself. She sounds so damn hot that I would love to lick on that big clit and get her juice all over my face.