All Comments on 'Mass Effect - A Hero Rises Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Didn't like him showing her the recording and then fucking her, didn't really make sense. Hope he doesn't continue to abuse his power.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Can't wait until the next chapter!

aisielynnaisielynnabout 4 years ago

“Abuse of Power” Anon....

He didn’t abuse his power. Yes, he showed her the video. But after securing her cooperation for the Alliance, he was more than willing to have her escorted to a crew bunk and leave it at that. She was the one who reiterated her offer to have sex with him. He admitted while on Nodacrux that he was attracted to her, so he had no qualms accepting her offer now that he knew (from her reaction to the video) that she was only misguided and not evil.

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Long time writer of fan fiction across various sites. Uploading here as most of my stories do have an erotic edge. Try to avoid writing plain porn, but I do get carried away in some chapters, which turn into nothing but a few thousand words of smut. The Dragonborn Comes - A m...