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A very different genre actor you. Heat to see you stretching your wings

@BruceWo - Thank you for the feedback, I hope you liked it. Yes, I'm trying new things, character concepts and so on :)

If you want to continue the story, it would be interesting to see the plot develop along the lines of

1. Aidan becoming a fuller character with changes in his emotional depth;

2. Christine mum gaining better balance in her life and greater appreciation of her own value;

3. Building out Danielle’s character;

4. Christine steering Aiden towards her daughter;

4. Aiden steering Christine towards his father; and

5. The two children establishing a relationship of equals and muscles.

Can’t wait for Part 2 when you describe Danielle’s tight gymnast body up close and in detail. Abs and tight muscle..

@BruceWo - these are really interesting ideas! Funny, but you have a similar thought process to me. If I would continue this story (and 'if' is a keyword :P), I planned to go in some of the directions you wrote about. Aiden would have to change a bit, because reading about such a cocky, blatant bastard would be tiring after some time. Of course, it couldn't be a 180 degrees change of character and making him a soft, sensitive puddle all of sudden. I hate when characters in any books or movies are transforming like that. He still would be sarcastic, but I think that could be interesting if he developed some soft spot and here comes Danielle's character ;) Of course, their relationship wouldn't be only sugar and honey, there would be some drama. He fucked her mother after all ;)

You surprised me though with matching Christine and Aiden's father, I hadn't thought about it! Interesting!

@Rambo89 - thanks for the comment, man! At first, I didn't plan to continue this story, but now it seems to be inevitable :D

Another great story. You are a fantastic writer, keep up the good work.

@fbblvr37 - thank you! You too have fantastic stories, I'm waiting for something new from you :)

Good story. When is Kinky Anniversary 3 going to come out, though?

@Anon - hey, thank for the opinion :) I hope that Kinky Anniversay 3 will be ready for March, but can't promise. Still working on it, as well on the other projects.

You did such a great character building with Aiden! Awesome job. Interesting! Are you planning on continuing the story?

@eraj - thank you very much! I have plans for the continuation, but it would have to wait for its turn ;)

next part?

@Anon - there will be the next part somewhen in the future, but can't tell when exactly.

your jokes were quite entertaining too the willem dafoe smile, amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@Anon - thank you, glad that you like my silly sense of humor ;)

So….. about that next chapter?

@BruceWo - I can't tell when, it's not on the top of priorities :)

I like the story a lot. I love Aiden, he is so spunky!

@Anon thank you, I'm glad that Aiden's character was fun to read :)

not bad...

all right!...

@Anons - thank you for the feedback! :)

Hoping for a sequel

@MonkeyMonkz - thanks for the comment! I hope that I'll manage to find time for that ;)

I loved the main character funny attitude! 😍

There should be a sequel

@Anon - hey, thank you for the comments!

Wonderful story!! Really like the main character. And the descriptions are hot 🔥

Waiting for the sequel with daughter (+/- Mom)

I really want to write a massage erotica in my future story as well and this serves as a real good inspiration.

@FlavorsOfYouth - thank you for the comment below on one of my bit of forgotten stories. I'm happy that you liked Aiden, and I must admit, I had a lot of fun writing him :)