All Comments on 'Massage Parlour'

Very smooth, very erotic. Flowed beautifully.

I have loved all your work but I need more please!!!!!!!

This story was horny, and very enjoyable. Two little quibbles, though. First, would the wife really have been angry about him visiting a massage parlour - after all she was more than happy for them to go to a swingers' club? Seems a little inconsistent. Second, just in a couple of tasty places, your description of the actual positions the two girls got into, became just a bit confusing. Short descriptive sentences here and there will help. Overall, very good.

In LW, every massage has a happy ending.

Although fairly well told, this was a FF encounter with a prostitute. There was no resemblance to a traditional massage. Setting the story in a nice hotel room would better suited the action and greatly decreased the sleaze factor.