by Daniel1
Although fairly well told, this was a FF encounter with a prostitute. There was no resemblance to a traditional massage. Setting the story in a nice hotel room would better suited the action and greatly decreased the sleaze factor.
This story was horny, and very enjoyable. Two little quibbles, though. First, would the wife really have been angry about him visiting a massage parlour - after all she was more than happy for them to go to a swingers' club? Seems a little inconsistent. Second, just in a couple of tasty places, your description of the actual positions the two girls got into, became just a bit confusing. Short descriptive sentences here and there will help. Overall, very good.
I have loved all your work but I need more please!!!!!!!