All Comments on 'Massage Room Four'

I'm not sure why this is rated so highly. It was obviously not read through for errors ('she' when the author meant 'me'), the characters are thin, there are strange omissions; the masseuse is clothed then naked, and they know each other's names but we don't know how.

With so many good stories in this category I don't see how this could be one of the top. While the author has talent, perhaps a few hours more effort would have made it a better story.

asianToy

I'm thrilled that people seem to be finding this piece sexy or in some way stirring. And thanks for the complement. I realize my editing needs work. I had written this in 3rd person first than changed it. I guess I didn't get all the changes. Minor stuff. However I don't believe I used names at all so not sure of that confusion.

I'm writing here to try to turn some people on and maybe inspire some couples to have a better and more imaginative sexlife. Let me know if it's working !

Work on you're details, Overlapping first person can be confusing!

Brilliant. This has given me a huge hard on