All Comments on 'Masso Joe Ch. 01'

A few grammatical errors spoiled an otherwise new twist on massaging mom stories.

Regardless gave you a 4 *

I liked it. Not quite down with the massage dude holding his cock before putting into his mom. Four stars. If it had been longer, I probably would have given it a fifth star.

Not promising when the second paragraph starts with, "Not waiting to anyone to change their minds..." Plenty more spelling and grammatical errors followed, though I did persevere to the end.

Work is definitely required to not annoy the reader.

I appreciate all your comments.

Being new to this and being excited to post, I agree that the editing on the starting chapter is poor and could be much improved. As the series moves forward I think you will notice a positive change.

Thanks for reading