All Comments on 'Master and the Maid Ch. 02'

Very nice chapter, but too short! Leaving it on a cliffhanger, come on man that's just cruel.

5 stars, keep the work coming.

Too short and way to vague on details. Also if he is new to the whole owning a neko thing then why does he have so many scars like he got mauled by a lion or tiger.

Sorry to repeat what others have said but I say it in hopes that it will change!

Personally I like to read before sleeping, it helps me relax. When I get hooked on a story I'd like each chapter to last more then 10 minutes of reading. In saying that I completely understand you have a life to live and have to work writings for a free website around said life. Maybe a patreon is in order so people can get early / faster access to upcoming content? I would pledge to that.

Other then that, very much enjoying the story, I hope you are planning to give some backstory into Kyles past and his scars? A war veteran against nekonians perhaps? My guess. :)

Regards,

Mr. N

There will be backstory on what happened to Kyle and why he is scarred but it has nothing to do with a war against the Nekonians. Also, I write in small chunks but publish often due to time constraints with my editor.

Please make chapters longer! The story is good so far!

Keep them coming this is panning out to be a corker!

Your story slowly bulids up emotions and love for its charecters. Just exactly what the readers want in a story

... its good but way too short. Had i nnot red 2 chapters one right after the other i would probably not even remember the story and definatetly would not wait for next chapter. Plz try merging 2-4 chapters and then upload it here as one read even with sub chapters. One page material is just way to small