All Comments on 'Master Jakob and Seth Ch. 01-03'

Hoping to get feedback on the story

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Good, straight forward writing. It sounds the way a young man would tell his story. I would have liked more about how they came to the point of Seth making this commitment. Golden showers are a turn off for me, so I'll have to skim past any of that in the future. I did appreciate that it did not go well on the first attempt. I hope there will be more about Master Jakob in future chapters. He's a mere shadow here.

thank you - i agree it needs more background - i will add more and maybe a flashback chapter to explain more about Seth's thought process in committing

sorry about the watersports - but i do have a little more of it written into a few future chapters - it's meant more to show the difference in each characters status where the slave needs to feel even lower than waste from the master

This story has me feeling some kind of way, my first thought was hmm okay then it went to red flag warning of Seth is being used for his money... I'll keep reading just to see where it goes.

I liked this first part very very much. I live in a relationship that has D/s elements and I am excited about showing this story to my Master. I particularly loved all the work that went into the elements of drinking piss and eating food leftovers. Looking forward to the next chapters. —-rocco