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The only thing I would change would be how words like He, His, and Him should be capatilized out of the respect Juliet should have for Master Julian. If my Master ever saw me writing about Him with lower case letters I would be severely punished and feel horrible about disrespecting Him. It would be a sign of how little He means to me and make Him believe I did not worship Him above all others.