by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
you should add a slime girl in the coming future and show would be able to get all the girls while having sex and maby do it in a way where he get kidnapped by her or something and raped or just kidnapped and he realises she is just innocent and wanted love and takes her back home
fox girl needed... jk I just like foxes XD but great story so far, cant wait to read more
Your story was great but can you add the reason for why momo changed in the first ch instead of within the period of a month since joining the hero
So far, I'm really enjoying the story. I appreciate the fact that there's an emotional attachment between the characters and he isn't a dick that just uses them. I would like to find out what's up with his ability to turn animals into girls though. Can't wait to read new chapters! Please keep it romantic, so it doesn't end up being just another spank story.
I was disappointed to see that you deleted a negative comment that seemed to be discouraging continuation of this series. But since you are continuing to release new chapters, I trust that you know how much your fans want you to keep going! :-)
I like the fact that you put humor into the story. more good humor would be great. Jokes about the situation makes the story more believable.
Also, since Halloween is coming up, it'd be a great way to spend an evening in the city. Master would be the only one needing a costume. A circus 3 ring master maybe? Or a vet?
Please keep writing. Very nice pastime.
Let me try this! Momo remarked that Master's cum smelled like the trash barrel beside his bed, implying that she may have checked the trash out as a cat. Sonya, as a dog, probably licked anything that smelled interesting, including bedsheets and the couch. Chloe didn't show up until after Master took Sonya in the pile of leaves, a perfectly normal place to find a field-mouse crawling around, looking for food.
Conclusion? It's something in Masters cum which, when ingested, changes the animals into anime(ls)!
I'm both incredibly turned on and laughing my ass off at this story. Very well written the sex and characters are amazing and actually interesting. I noticed this series ended but I hope you continue to make more amazing stories like this.
Keep up the great work!
[22.09.22]
I really love the humour and heart in this series, especially:
[But I'm pretty sure that at that point, Jesus Christ would ride down on a T-Rex and bitch slap me just for being the lucky piece of shit I am.]
Reminding me of that bloody hilarious meme floating around.
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I've been enjoying this. The fact that's it's a plot line that I haven't seen before is what is best for me. My enjoyment of sci fi is discovering a new world or new behaviors and norms with the author. And I appreciate the contrast between Master's maturity/responsibility and the girls' immature curiosity.
[21.11.22]
Looove this line:
She straddled my lap and stuck herself on my dick like a marker top.
A line from 'When The Lion Feeds' keeps popping into my head. "Dufford, you're a pig!" LMAO at the Jesus riding T-Rex bitch slap. I don't know how to describe your style, but refreshing comes up way short. 5 stars, of course!