All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 09'

Stop making these so great, I'm up till around 3 am every night re-reading them over and over. In all seriousness, these are amazing but I would like to see something like them probing the woods to find other hybrids.

I still think you should have used a halloween angle. The big trip to the zoo should be on oct 31st.

Well, it's interesting to see a story take on the whole world. That was unexpected, and a bit unwanted. I was on board until a chapter or two ago. Now there's an intrusion on the little world by...whatever the hell this farm is, and taking over the world. I do like how each character has retained their peculiarities, but I'm not so sure about this slime skin stuff...although the body suit is pretty funny. It'll probably turn out fine, it has so far. Its too late to do anything about it anyway.

Yeah this has gone a bit too far in one direction. This almost a complete juxtaposition to the point of not wanting it. While the build-up of the characters is very good up until the last few chapters, the Elise thing is out of left-field.

I am enjoying the story so far, though that plot twist hits right out of the blue. Also thank you for giving Penelope a name, it broke my heart reading about her, I wished there was a way of bringing her back.

Enjoyed the story till chapter 8. Now this plot twist with all these characters really killed the mood. The MC should have just stayed in his house.

Why change the story so much?

I agree with the previous comments, you were on to something that was really unique and fun and took a crazy and imo unnecessary turn. I'm still on board to see where this goes but would love to rewind right up to the farm.

Just to make it clear, this was a great story until the Mc breakdown, totally out of character. On chapter 8 it totally derails, and I'm going to keep reading it just to fulfill that morbid curiosity of seeing it crash. Sorry dude.

This is gonna be fun.

Yes Rivenous, this IS going to be fun,

I'm still in. I understand the negative comments but I'm still reading to see where it goes. I do kinda skip the sex at this point though. It's a bit repetitive. But it's still fun and funny.