All Comments on 'Master of Discipline'

by Ashson

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ZackeryFaelanZackeryFaelanalmost 11 years ago
Cheery!

Pretty sure I wasn't supposed to laugh as hard as I did at this but I really liked Mason. I mean, he took a situation that was crummy and turned it into something with a silver-lining! That was awesome. Great character development and I know a couple people that ended up in a similar situation so it's believable. Thanks for sharing this!

sweetandspicy47sweetandspicy47almost 11 years ago

Always love your stories. This one is no exception. Clever and sexy too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
5*

I too, laughed. I also smiled and groaned and moaned and came. I want Mason's email. I've been bad, very bad.

erotic_euphoriaerotic_euphoriaalmost 11 years ago
Thoroughly Enjoyable

I loved this character! He was amusing and had a very sexy sort of personality. I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I didn't cum but I did laugh, thanks for the comedy cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
comedy pleasure

This story was funny and very, very sexy. Love it :0) x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

I just found you today Ashson and you're quickly becoming one of my favorite author's on here. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Punishment ...

The spankings and timid girl sent me to love this read. A man in control is very hot. Would love to see if she or Violet went back for him. Wanting to be his girlfriend, who wouldn't :-) . Sexy sassy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
An absolute...

treat! Thanks for sharing your wit and excellent writing skills. The tips on spanking were superb. You rank with the best at lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And you think that was funny?

Just awful.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 10 years ago
entertaining

I thot it was quite entertaining and could not stop reading until it was over... not good enough reading to look for the next installment tho

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 8 years ago
That's No Joke!

After that less than 1% of the e-mails replying to the bogus Craig's List add paying off with a Daily Double,I'll bet Mason is sorry he'd deleted the rest.

- For a guy who didn't place that add though,he sure seemed to know a lot about the art of spanking!

- Hot stuff, and worth a 5 stars rating!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"shook her head"

This may be a difference in the way you all talk Down Under, but up here in the US, if you say she shook her head, that means she was saying No. The word for shaking your head Yes is "nod".

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