This remains a good story of new ideas, at least new to me. It is the clever development of new ideas that makes sci Fi and fantasy appealing to me and this story certainly has that. Bravo
I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...