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bruce_parkerover 8 years agoWOW
You've captured my interest, I'm very curious as to where this story is headed.
Anonymousover 7 years agoDon't switch POVs so much during a scene, and don't announce it either. If you really want to tell it from another character's perspective use a scene break.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoA different plot line
I expected the same genre typology and it seems we have a twist in chapter1 !
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