by Barryboy700
Not sure where this is going, but it seems like other categories could be more appropriate. (loving wives is where I usually see cuckolding and cheating, and the only ‘coupling’ that occurred was not that erotic and was between the married couple
Barry, you have a beautiful writing style, and this story develops in a way that is understandable. Of course, it needs a sequel. It seems that Robert and Henri were at university together, which suggests that Lara is not quite young either. I would like it better if Lara was well under 30, Robert could be younger then by the way. Robert's father and Henri could also have studied together. Since a dominant personality does not fall from the sky, there also needs to be an explanation why Henri only develops into a DOM at an advanced age. Conceivable would be that Henri was forced in the last years to bring his increasingly demented father under control.
Thank you and best regards from Germany!!!
I am already very excited about the sequel!
I wish someone would translate this story into German.
Hot Hot Hot! 10 stars for the writer! Great Writing, Great Plot, and Great effort. The Ending was good. This whole story is a wet dream! Fantastic Idea! Thanks, Buster2U