All Comments on 'Master PC - The Great Game Ch. 01'

Hmm. Somehow this user died easily. Just, anyone who knew about the threat from them would calmly prepare. All you need to do is give yourself the ability to control time. And no enemy without protection from this program can stop you.

This is my humble opinion about the opening scene :)

And so an interesting plot. 4 out of 5.

Actually I red to the end of page 1 Totally lost intrist. no rating for this

Whatever the story line is, it is unintelligible with the disconnected fragments in this chapter.

Ive read the other stories... and I was hopeful for this one. But it drug on more than a bit and I wish you the best though.

Nicely done, I look forward to seeing where this is going. Please don't be discouraged by comments from people who apparently have trouble understanding big words and an actual plot line.

Looking forward to further chapters. Matt reminds me of a friend of mine, physically speaking.

The story needs something, but by the time they're all leaving each of the friends are defined and loveable in their own ways.

Mars introduction was jarring, I think because you wanted a shock twist, but with a gods name on a she/her it was distracting obvious, there's no surprise reveal, so I'd suggest either a feminine name or a more straightforward explanation at her perspective

Liked the set-up, excited for what you come up with next

Fantastic opening of a fantanstic series

Just discovered your stories, find them intensely compelling and can't wait to see more!!

was rubbish, and even one star was too good for it.