All Comments on 'Master Swimmer Ch. 07'

My fave story so far, I loved the range and variety of things in this series, really got me off and gave me some great ideas too. Now I have to get hubby to read it and hope he takes the hint in places. I'm sure he will. ;)

that this story completely turned me off.There are missing words, misspelled words,repetitious paragraphs in which you say again what you just said, in almost the same words, confusions over who's speaking…and on and on.

One small example out of hundreds:

"Sue," he whispered. "Is she OK?"

Rob smiled and said, "Oh yes!

You can't possibly have proofread this story before you submitted it. Such carelessness is an insult to your readers. What do you get out of messing around like this—?

Sue in Los Altos

Those people hardly finish their basic schooling because of low IQ ! Just mark appropriately. "1" !