All Comments on 'Master's First Inspection'

by Daddy_Jack

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Good

A good start,could be a very good story. You are obviously an experienced writer go for it.

angelx602angelx602over 15 years ago
very nice

I really enjoyed reading this story, hope there are more soon.

vixylixvixylixover 14 years ago
***

Wow, I loved this. This is going in my favorites for sure...so hot!

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