All Comments on '"Masturbation is not incest"'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thats it? Where is the rest of it? So far a 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sequel please. Whenever you can.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

This will continue to its logical conclusion. Liked it

smltwnguysmltwnguyover 1 year ago

Great simple story. Might be a good starting point for a series. Thanks for sharing with us all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Love the connection and love they share. Ending feels rushed to finish. Hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This one deserves another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great beginning for a longer series…this ending for this particular section is a really crappy one. 3 stars

MCMaineNudistMCMaineNudistover 1 year ago

Hot. But why haven’t they fucked yet? How can two horny siblings who share a bed, not have beautiful sex.

Marvin2017Marvin2017over 1 year ago

No reason this story ends here. Left so much untold. Perhaps you should take a day off

and finish what you started (not being cheeky, just playing off your last line).

I’ve always felt authors that use the excuse “use your imagination” either have writers

block or are just lazy. Maybe we, your readers, can come up with something?

3⭐️, 5⭐️ if you or we finish it for you.

Marvin

JGellarJGellarover 1 year ago

Love to see this story get further developed.

sargedog1sargedog1over 1 year ago

Short is good, the build up is well frankly to thick. We get that he's attracted to her physically and most certainly intertwined emotionally. It's lite wank to be sure. I liked it. Couple odd gaffs toward the end but nicely polished.

I get the sense that sis wants to advance it more, so a chapter more or two would be a sweet addition. Thanks for your time.

CharletteCharletteover 1 year ago

Well Damn !

The story was rolling along just fine when suddenly the author feels guilty about having such thoughts !

GMRTakeruGMRTakeruover 1 year ago

3 star ⭐ for now until thing progress further between them that well until then it wouldn't be 5 star ⭐

mross2004mross2004over 1 year ago

would love to see brother and sister have sex in a part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

many siblings close in age have done similar things. It relieves stress and builds confidence. Often limits are set and it works out well

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"I've had threesomes before and I've never cum like this." <-- this is cringe. Don't say shit like this, it's cringe. The story also ends too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lame, too long no sex

Newhobby15Newhobby15about 1 year ago

Hey, I know I’m late to the game on this one but I just recently found your writings. Love the story and I really hope you continue it one day. Thank you.

OseekerOseekerabout 1 year ago

Took forever to reach the peqk & then it ended too quickly...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Dude continue

NesticNestic9 months ago

excellent story ... please, please continue

Lust4heragainLust4heragain8 months ago

Very good story, like it building up to sexual intimacy between the two. Next step is sex, hope you continue with story.

245624568 months ago

That was really good. Another chapter would be great. 5/5.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What a story! Can't help but think it deserves a continuation

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very good story. Please continue

BrendaNWBrendaNW5 months ago

Lovely story, please continue their adventure together 🤗 😘

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

OMG that was so hot!

OseekerOseekerabout 2 months ago

Only so so from me...

Too much back 'n forth about 'you're my brother' and 'you're my sister'.....

Both want to...So just do it!

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Definitely needs to be continued

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I write for publication and just post here on my free time. I don't seek out editors and everything here is usually written in under an hour. Writing can become a chore when you're doing it for money. This is just a way to put more enjoyment into a hobby