by sensuallystricken
Great simple story. Might be a good starting point for a series. Thanks for sharing with us all.
Great story. Love the connection and love they share. Ending feels rushed to finish. Hope there is more to come.
Great beginning for a longer series…this ending for this particular section is a really crappy one. 3 stars
Hot. But why haven’t they fucked yet? How can two horny siblings who share a bed, not have beautiful sex.
No reason this story ends here. Left so much untold. Perhaps you should take a day off
and finish what you started (not being cheeky, just playing off your last line).
I’ve always felt authors that use the excuse “use your imagination” either have writers
block or are just lazy. Maybe we, your readers, can come up with something?
3⭐️, 5⭐️ if you or we finish it for you.
Marvin
Short is good, the build up is well frankly to thick. We get that he's attracted to her physically and most certainly intertwined emotionally. It's lite wank to be sure. I liked it. Couple odd gaffs toward the end but nicely polished.
I get the sense that sis wants to advance it more, so a chapter more or two would be a sweet addition. Thanks for your time.
Well Damn !
The story was rolling along just fine when suddenly the author feels guilty about having such thoughts !
3 star ⭐ for now until thing progress further between them that well until then it wouldn't be 5 star ⭐
many siblings close in age have done similar things. It relieves stress and builds confidence. Often limits are set and it works out well
"I've had threesomes before and I've never cum like this." <-- this is cringe. Don't say shit like this, it's cringe. The story also ends too soon.
Hey, I know I’m late to the game on this one but I just recently found your writings. Love the story and I really hope you continue it one day. Thank you.
Very good story, like it building up to sexual intimacy between the two. Next step is sex, hope you continue with story.
Only so so from me...
Too much back 'n forth about 'you're my brother' and 'you're my sister'.....
Both want to...So just do it!