All Comments on 'Matching Day'

The story was well conceived and told. I look forward to more of your work.

Very good read I enjoyed it. The idea of the perfect society reminded me of the movie Logan's Run. Keep up the writing and I look forward to reading more.

If there was anything wrong with this story, it's that some more backdrop at the beginning would have been nice. It all gets explained, in due course, but the opening leaves the reader wondering "where and when, and why do we have arranged marriages which 'always' last forever".

The ending resolves all the issues, for everyone except Salvia. (Could be a follow-up story, there.) That youngest Elder was a bit disappointing in that he did the right thing, but resolved to resort to deception in order to conceal it.

Overall, great work of fiction.

What I think was different in this story is that one person died, which put out of place the male/female role call to create couples. This meant that Mason paired up with Salvia instead of Lenei? Does that mean that every pairing after Mason and Lenei was wrong too?

I think I must have got this totally wrong, otherwise the whole story would fall apart. And I really wouldn't want that.

THE REPERCUSSIONS OF THEIR ACT WOULD MAKE FOR A GREAT FOLLOW UP STORY, GREAT STORY . GOOD WRITING HOPE TO SEE MORE

Great story! I would love to know what happened after they left. I hope that you continue this one. If not it was still wonderful.

What a load of rubbish. Stop writing you are useless.

What do you get from being so nasty?

Thankyou for writing this story

Anonymous: Such a sad comment from a hollow person.

It was a lovely story of love and I enjoyed it very much.

That was truly uncalled for...

Dear SmallTownPrincess -

Please write more - I loved it.

I really wish you would add more to this story, it's so great.

I don't know why but I cried reading this story.

I really liked that! Thank You! 5*'s easy...Write more Romance stories...