All Comments on 'Mated to the Pack Ch. 01'

Interesting start

Intriguing concept.

Promising start, looking forward to more.

Well written story with a new twist. Looking forward to the next installment.

An immaculate piece of work. Great developing story line. I feel like Hollywood could turn this into a movie!

Good interesting start

I agree, an interesting start and concept.

Great start. I am interested in what kind of relationship Jessica expects to have with her children going forward. Giving up a child is a big deal and she seems to be running into it.

Like your other writings always a question of what is coming next.

Awesome start, look forward to reading more as you get the chance to write.

Great story so far and looking forward more

Thanks for writing

I just love the start of this new story. I am a fan of your other writing, having read most of them more than once....:)

Can't wait for the next chapters....

Excellent start, looking forward to more.

Have enjoyed the Beth series and can understand your desire to create avsartisfying conclusion while leaving it open for more if you so wish.

Interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing how you expand your ideas. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. 🙏👏☺️

Love the story line and can see a sea of possibilities. Come on! Write!

Sorry to be late checking in. I was glad to see this. I was curious how you’d make a werewolf story stand out from the rest of the “pack”. As usual, you’ve come up with well developed characters, a believable premise, interesting plot line and LOTS of potential for all kinds of ruffled fur situations. Looking forward to more! And I will happily wait on you to be happy with your ending of Descent. I hate to say goodbye to those characters, so I’ve no doubt it’s very difficult for you, and I’ll quietly hope that eventually you’ll find a way to bring them back to us one way or another!

Absolutely fascinating, there are so many possibilities in this first instalment of this story, of the various directions it could take. I’m definitely curious to read more the irony isn’t lost on me that I hate “breeder” type stories where the goal is to get every woman pregnant with or without her consent. That’s not the case in this instance, surrogacy is an informed choice.

As for the bestiality aspect of the story there’s a strong possibility that I might need to quit reading I genuinely don’t see how it’s supposed to be appealing, for now I can skip those parts. I’m looking forward to catching up with Beth’s shenanigans fingers crossed that people aren’t hassling you over it.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Just finished the first seven chapters. Great story. Thanks

Love the development of the story, it draws the reader in visually.

Greatly respect your writing in " TASTE " & WBDP SERIES.

BUT ! DEAR AUTHOR, this is beyond me. Congrats on limiting the really long paragraphs. Big improvement. Very happy to see THORS FIST STORY written in 2023. Maybe too much for me. Like BDSM better. Still THANK YOU !