All Comments on 'Maternal Girl'

I wanted to give this story a good skimming through, and I thought there is no such thing as a playful or light BDSM,I also think that this was put in the wrong category no daughter should treat her mother that way no matter how bad it was, I should have went with my first thought and not read this

jenorma2012 - "Have went" is not English. You may want to learn the most basic grammar and simple punctuation before trying to critique anything someone else has written. OMG.

Is there going to be more I hope so

Could both step mom and blood mom be made slaves/subs

I disagree with jenorma, as I do on most of her comments. A few errors I can easily overlook. We're reading erotica, not classical literature. Anon 1 was right to castigate her. I also stand with anon 2. I hope at some point she makes her mom and stepmom both her subs. Hope to see more soon.

TimTam

Once again, another cracking story. I really love this series, I have to say! Good job, Smokey125!

Also, jenorma, I swear that I've seen your comments on quite a few stories that I frequent, and they always seem to be about how you don't like BDSM or tying. I promise I'm not trying to have a go or anything - you're perfectly entitled to your opinion, and each to their own etc. But I do have to ask - if you really don't like BDSM stories that you need to vocalise it every time you read one, why do you keep subjecting yourself to them? I don't like stories that feature large inter-generational age gaps, but if I discover that a story I'm reading features such, I just click off and find one that I do.