All Comments on 'Maths Lessons Get Hot'

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Red24GRed24Galmost 17 years ago
EDIT

There are a lot of grammatical errors please get an editor.

Red24GRed24Galmost 17 years ago
EDIT

There are a lot of grammatical errors please get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hot

really enjoyed this it realli turned me on

love the older men younger female stories

could have been spiced up a little more at the sex scene for future reference.

Well done for your 1s story

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
Nice plot...

to the story. Her patience proved to be a virtue. There were a few errors or things that were overlooked but I managed to read right through them so they weren't major problems. I would suggest that you always read your story over 3 times, on different days, before submitting. Its amazing what you can catch with a fresh mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story had way too many spelling and word usage errors to make it first rate. There is no such thing as “ maths” . Its “math”. Engage a good editor and your story will improve.

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