All Comments on 'Maths Lessons Get Hot'

This story had way too many spelling and word usage errors to make it first rate. There is no such thing as “ maths” . Its “math”. Engage a good editor and your story will improve.

to the story. Her patience proved to be a virtue. There were a few errors or things that were overlooked but I managed to read right through them so they weren't major problems. I would suggest that you always read your story over 3 times, on different days, before submitting. Its amazing what you can catch with a fresh mind.

really enjoyed this it realli turned me on

love the older men younger female stories

could have been spiced up a little more at the sex scene for future reference.

Well done for your 1s story

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There are a lot of grammatical errors please get an editor.

There are a lot of grammatical errors please get an editor.