All Comments on 'Matt Needs a Place to Stay... Ch. 08'

I have loved this series, but this chapter doesn't have the strength of the previous ones. Too much sex scenes, without story content. Just my opinion, though.

Great story, you beautifully describe the sex scenes and how much Matt-Mathilde became addicted to being a submissive girlfriend to Rayan. In this part, you devoted most of it to the description of sex and there is not enough plot description of everyday life. I am waiting with great interest and impatience for the further adventures of Matt-Mathilde and Rayan and Kayle, the family and perhaps the road to the wedding carpet ... or something more extreme. Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw. 📝

Wspaniałe opowiadanie, pięknie opisujesz sceny seksu i jak bardzo Matt-Mathilde został uzależniony od bycia uległym a wręcz dziewczynką dla Rayana. W tej części poświęciłeś w większości na opis seksu a za mało jest opisu fabularnego takiego przedstawiającego codzienność. Z wielkim zainteresowaniem i niecierpliwością czekam na dalsze losy Matt-Mathilde i Rayana oraz Kayle, rodziny a może i drogi na ślubny kobierzec... czy coś bardziej ekstrymalnego. Pozdrawiam z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy. 📝

Hello,

Is Matt unknowingly on female hormones, because there is no way that he grows 'full boobs', 'thick thighs', female pheromones and a big ass without them? Wishful thinking is not enough for him to change his body in that manner. Also, could you please proofread your stories for spelling and grammar mistakes, as it really takes away from the story, and makes it difficult to read. I do like the gist of the story and hope you continue.

Thank you.

Hello MingusLee,

it's a pity that you stopped writing the stories of Matt-Mathilde, Rayan and Kayle, don't you have an idea for their further fate? or maybe something else is the reason that you don't write a very nice, interesting story?

I am waiting with great interest and great impatience for the further fate of Matta-Mathilde and Rayan.

Sorry for any errors and language inconsistencies, I don't speak English. Best regards, SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 👩🏻‍🦳🧒🏻‍♀️👧🏻❤️👨🏻‍🎓⚧️🧑🏻.