All Comments on 'Mattei - A Nation's Father Ch. 02'

One issue however. Since when was it agreed to start calling him Milord? And why did he just ignore it like it was natural? I mean I guess he had to be called something since he was trying to be anonymous, another decision which makes little sense since he plans on being in his baby's lives. I dunno the title threw me out of the story for a bit. Otherwise, good tale. Keep it up!

Futeristic stories like this are usually not my thing, however, you have me hooked for sure and I am anxious to get to part three. You write very well and to tell the truth, I wish you were telling me this story while we were snuggled in bed on a cold winters night. Probably not the reaction you expected but a good story deserves honesty. On to part 3.

Most authors I’ve read, use italics when using the inner voice instead of speaking quotes. Decent story so far. A little put off by him going from so emotionally concerned about things to let er rip the scene. :)