All Comments on 'Mature Widow Pt. 01'

Nice story but a lot of misspellings and wrong word errors. Consider an editor for the next one.

wow! Thanks,

I look forward to your next treat.

Please keep writing.

A great story, very Erotic. Ignore the bad spelling comment. I could picture her perfectly, by your discription.

The story didn't flow and went from "Hi, I'm your neighbor" immediately to sexy talk. Makes very little sense. You need to work on building up your story to capture the attention of your readers. Oh and way too many grammatical errors too made it somewhat sloppy.

Some of this was HOT. Most of it was not. There are far too many spelling errors to enjoy.