All Comments on 'Maureen's Dare'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Start

This was an excellent start, and I like the character building. When an author can take the time to make the characters real, it's more fun to imagine the taboos they might break. Looking forward to more. Definatley want to read the wife's perspective on things too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great start!

Very hot - I love seeing good wives get nasty! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

availableslave2uavailableslave2uabout 15 years ago
Great Story

Nice job with this one. I love the build up. I would love to give a blow job in an alley like that. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
what a start

great start one of the best i wish you could find a man for maureen who is not the usual stud the very handsame man but an average guy that can score with a real milf

oriondogoriondogabout 15 years ago
Judging from

your other stories we may have to wait a while for part 2

eronoireeronoireabout 15 years agoAuthor
The wait for Part 2 won't be long

I'm almost finished with it and intend to submit it early next week.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Impatient

I really enjoyed this story, and find myself impatient for the second entry. Since the husband wants another man to treat his wife in ways he hasn't maybe he should collar her and force her to submit to a master in role playing.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
he should be careful about opening Pandora's box

If he takes her out and gets her fucked by some stranger with a big cock, she may want to keep doing it......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Thanks!

Thanks for sharing your your story. I loved the storyline and look forward to seeing your next installment! I have a feeling that Maureen may indeed open up a bit and things could get wild...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep it up

Bring on chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
chapter 2

Can't wait to see what slutty things he has in store for her :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Follow-up?

So.........did you ever come up with a continuation? Very, very good start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
b/day present

Would love to hear all about that b/day present..

T & A

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice start, but no follow-on/completion

OK, we got the premise of an adventure. Sadly, as it turns out, it wasn't "To Be Continued." Apparently, the writer abandoned the story.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Fortunately

The author abandoned this mess as a lost cause.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

NEXT ?? MORE !!

SwewxxxSwewxxx6 months ago

The author left us all curious about what hubby planned to...

There were so many opportunities.

Sorry for someone else not have continued.

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